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Difference of Two Years... by Lovable-Yukiko Difference of Two Years... by Lovable-Yukiko
Redo of my old artwork from beginning of 2012 (12/27/11).
Such slow improvement but surely. It's been one year since I was introduced to copics~ I now own 27 :D

The left is the earliest version of Ai as you can see C:
The right is updated <3 I figured she needed a SIGNATURE outfit.
So. Ta-da!!!

Uploading cleaned edited version later. Uploading with iPod sucks..
Art(c) Lovable-Yukiko (me)



*censored old boobs cause they were just bad u___u*
:iconsatsuya-junichiro:
since you requested a critique anyways, that is definitely a lot of improvement, not just that you manage to conjur an entirely new style.
This time i wont really sugar coat it as well, gomen :icontearplz:

all the crits will be based on your newer drawing.

Detail. So far with most of your works, i love your attention to detail and small things, because those small things are what make the picture come together.
(btw, is that copic you're using? if so, that's good use of copic)

Your drawing detail flowiness is there, it's not stalwart

One thing which plagues it again is well posture and flexibility of the character itself, you could perhaps try some gesture drawings or anatomical study to get a better view of things :3

well that's all for now, and i think your improvement is quite good considering the time given
What do you think?
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chibifool Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
very nice! you've made a great improvement. however, the first is still much better than what i can draw. :3
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